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Semester work assignment #2

“India moon mission: Vikram lunar lander found on surface”

Recently, India’s lunar lander made an attempt to approach the Moon in order to observe and if possible collect some samples of ice water. Considering the fact that it was the country’s second space campaign mission to the Moon, no wonder that it attracted a lot of attention from varies countries around the world because if water deposits had been found and cosmonauts had reached them, it could have helped science a lot.


To begin with, although the mission had experienced a failure, nevertheless, it caused lots of countries to prove the existence of water deposits by launching their own space programmes. According to the fact that water presence is connected with life, it could’ve solved the demographic problem the Earth is facing nowadays. For example, we could build space stations on the Moon at first and then find lots of other much bigger and more convenient planets to live on. Moreover, India is now the fourth country that has ever landed a spacecraft on the Moon and it means that the country has contributed a lot to the development of space technology throughout history. Another aspect I’d like to consider is a huge sum of money that was spent on this project. Thus, the government now has to suspend the mission for quite substantial period which I personally think is a negative scenario due to many efforts that were spent on implementing the plan that was not finished. India might subsequently lose its opportunity to be the first country that has ever collected the Moon’s water. In addition, collected samples of water may push science to lots of new discoveries had the mission not been unsuccessful. In particular, firstly, we could try to explore the whole celestial body and that could give us tons of new information about it so that we could start gradual colonization of the Moon. Secondly, scientists might examine the Moon’s water and put forward lots of new ideas on how to make cosmonauts’ exploration much longer as they could use the satellite’s resources aside from their own. 

 All things considered, I’m convinced that although India didn’t manage to achieve its goal, the country nonetheless was the first to discover water on the Moon’s surface. Consequently, it means that India started the space race which may push other countries to explore the Moon and create new technology so that scientists and astronauts can provide the world with the opportunity to experience living on other planets very soon. 
The reference pages: 
1) “India Moon Mission.” 9 Sept. 2019, https://www.theguardian.com/science/2019/sep/09/india-moon-mission-vikram-lunar-lander-found-on-surface.

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    According to the fact that water presence is connected with life, it **could’ve solved the demographic problem the Earth is facing nowadays
    ARTICLES: for quite ART substantial period
    **we could’ve built space stations on the Moon
    Why the III type of conditionals is used, not the II?

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    1. Well, that was not the cleverest decision to be made. I'm going to correct my mistakes.

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